Changes:
8.5x11
- added the stars at the top
- changed the text at the top
- got rid of the text on the screen, added an illustration
- moved the address to the corner so it matches the other 2 ads
- added the website to the bottom left corner to balance with the address
3.5x11
- added the stars at the top
- added a horizon line to help give perspective
- added the blue arrow to give a better idea of what's going on
5.5x5.5
- added the stars at the top
- changed 'take' to 'bring' so I wouldn't have 2 ads with 'take' in them
- added the blue hearts
its lookin really good sean! I love the little characters on the movie screen!
ReplyDeleteI really like them! The stars make them look much more complete. The only thing is I think in the last one it's supposed to be spelled "sweetie" ... i think.
ReplyDeleteThanks guys. So... sweetie? I'm not sure which way is correct, 'sweety' seemed more natural to me... Maybe it can go either way.
ReplyDeleteYou nailed the large Ad. Love the dancing candy which is so tied into old drive-in visits. Everything is working at maximum visibility and success. Each Ad is complete. Great storytelling and great attention to detail. You have a winner on your hands.
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