I took into account the comments I got and made some changes. I tried to make the cars more recognizable, and I played around with the location of the type.
I'm liking the look of this... but I am worried how it might look scaled down... maybe a simpler version would be better ???
The cars look a lot better! I actually thought the ones before were seats.. I also like the type in the screen like you have a on the bottom one! these are nice! I can say that I am torn between keeping the cars or letting them go.. I really like them... i dont know?!
ReplyDeleteI'm really liking this, it looks like you're having a lot of fun with it. My one piece of advice would be to consider keeping it a two-color thing. Black/grey + one of the colors on the movie screen. I think that if you use the right color and possibly reverse out the type, legibility will be good even at a tiny size. Keep it up, get as many opinions as you can.
ReplyDeleteThanks John. I am going to try it a few more ways and I will take your ideas into consideration. Yes, I am having fun with it, but a little frustrated because my ideas aren't quite flowing as easily as the ones for my other client are.
ReplyDeleteMelanie, lol that you thought the cars were seats. I was in such a hurry to get the idea out that I just drew them in quickly. I'm thinking that if I didn't include them in the actual logo I could use them in some sort of ad. I am definitely gonna listen to you on the type because in all of your pieces you have shown you are a GENIUS typographically. I envy that about you!!! The type on your paperboys poster and the beer pack were really amazing.
To keep the cars or not to keep th cars, that is the _________.
ReplyDeleteErm. I don't know. No cars for main logo and cars for the front sign? I like them.
And no, he isn't taking a dump in the photo, but he probably just had finished peeing on my laundry. That's his thing.
Hey you...I like this exploration of ideas. I have several that are my favorite and it might be some earlier with the film strip that you choose to use. Something about mixing that with the type is a nice novel idea. We can chat about it in class but it's really developing with a good sense of professionalism and hard work. bravo.
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